ctw [Suggestion] New Lobby to CTW! / No Oficial / By SS / 1.8.X

[Slendy]

New Lobby By SS (SlendydiegoPro and southrumble80). [1.8]

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Hi Craftersland Community, we made another spawn to the minigame "Capture The Wool". (We hope you like it!).

 

We've noticed that the ctw lobby has spent a lot of time online lately, which is why we decided to survey the players. From the data collected, we found that the players wanted a new lobby most, so we made one. Our goal is to replace the old spawn with our lobby. Otherwise, it will not matter if we continue making more lobbies!  

 

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Pictures

https://imgur.com/a/3BWXFg2

Download This Awesome Lobby [1.8]

http://www.mediafire.com/file/rl7ckzxzkyo3p2l/Spawn CTW.rar

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Thanks For Read This Post! 

 

-SS

 

 

[Momoloquendo]

Good job

[southrumble80]

@Momoloquendo Thank you bro

[Henk]

I do like it, I do have some constructive criticism .. once again

 

• The statue is really cool and I defiantly think it has a place in the spawn, but it is too big and takes up too much of the space in the inner circle. 
• The CTW text in my opinion looks better in black and gray, how ever it's so far up that it will hardly ever be visable
• You spawn in in a crossroads, having to make the choice left or right, giving as few choices as possible is great for a spawn
• While the tribute room looks great, but takes up a big part of already the small spawn

 

• I like the option of being able to explore, climbing the waterfall, finding the cave with some minor parkour and just the attention to detail in everything. I'm thinking the random buttons laying around, the minecart in the games cave, iron bars, everything. Waterfall effects, wheat and flowers, etc.

 

 

So what I think would've been better and more practical could've been to first raise the bottom platform by ~5 blocks. screws with the cave somewhat...
I would move the statue and have him peak in over the side on the very top layer. maybe two even.
I would make the inner circle an oval, or more like a bullet shape.. having the player spawn in the far back. Visable is the CTW sign that has been brought down (straight ahead) and below it the entrance to the games. Behind spawn would be the waterfall, or on the sides. Adding the player heads in the tribute room instead as secrets, which could be found by exploring the cave, pushing random buttons.. you name it. Instead of having the room itself.

 

Don't get me wrong-.. I think it's a beautiful creation and it is absolutely stunning- I am simply giving criticism to making it more practical as a spawn. and I know it's a lot of re-doing what I'm suggesting, and I'm not saying that you should do it

[southrumble80]

@Henk 
Hey!! thank you for reply to this topic and for your constructive criticism!
We will improve all those micro details next time!!

:P

[Henk]

"micro"

 

[gerry_lmao]

Really good job! 

[Guest]

Cool spawn :)!

I really wish this spawn to be added

[iiTzArismaltor_]

It looks really cool. Well done!

[Slendy]

Thanks gerry, Sniper and iitzArismaitor we appreciate yours opinions !

 

-SS

[xtomyserrax]

Heeeey, cool lobby! I really like how you made it and the decorations! Keep up the amazing work!

[Slendy]

2 hours ago, xtomyserrax said:

Heeeey, cool lobby! I really like how you made it and the decorations! Keep up the amazing work!

thanks, xtomyserrax we appreciate your oppinion!

-SS

[TanujGaming]

Well done! Excited to see this in-game.

[Slendy]

8 hours ago, TanujGaming said:

Well done! Excited to see this in-game.

 

Thank you bro, we appreciate it! 

 

-SS

[TheO0032]

I looked over the map, and it's great, and comparable to some maps I've seen on the bigger servers! Well done! 

 

I'd like to suggest some edits to your first post. I'm a bit of a grammar nazi - and I would like to apologize if my editing of the document offends you. The edits I made are in bold. Deletions are unmarked, however, so instead of making the edits yourself, it's best to use copy and paste  and edit out what you don't want - that is, in the case that you want to use my edited version. If not, feel free to ignore this!

 

We've noticed that the ctw lobby has spent a lot of time online lately, which is why we decided to survey the players. From the data collected, we found that the players wanted a new lobby most, so we made one. Our goal is to replace the old spawn with our lobby. Otherwise, it will not matter if we continue making more lobbies!

[Slendy]

6 hours ago, TheO0032 said:

I looked over the map, and it's great, and comparable to some maps I've seen on the bigger servers! Well done! 

 

I'd like to suggest some edits to your first post. I'm a bit of a grammar nazi - and I would like to apologize if my editing of the document offends you. The edits I made are in bold. Deletions are unmarked, however, so instead of making the edits yourself, it's best to use copy and paste  and edit out what you don't want - that is, in the case that you want to use my edited version. If not, feel free to ignore this!

 

We've noticed that the ctw lobby has spent a lot of time online lately, which is why we decided to survey the players. From the data collected, we found that the players wanted a new lobby most, so we made one. Our goal is to replace the old spawn with our lobby. Otherwise, it will not matter if we continue making more lobbies!

 

Thanks for the writing correction, we are grateful!  

 

-SS 

[TheO0032]

Also, you might want to remove the boldness. Instead, paste this: 

 

We've noticed that the ctw lobby has spent a lot of time online lately, which is why we decided to survey the players. From the data collected, we found that the players wanted a new lobby most, so we made one. Our goal is to replace the old spawn with our lobby. Otherwise, it will not matter if we continue making more lobbies!